贴两个把我打哭了的REP请求分析指导

TheTerrakion

https://replay.pokemonshowdown.com/gen3ou-937486234

https://replay.pokemonshowdown.com/gen3ou-937495430

TheTerrakion

两把所使用的队伍：

Venusaur @ Leftovers  
Ability: Overgrow  
EVs: 68 Def / 164 SpA / 56 SpD / 220 Spe  
Modest Nature  
IVs: 2 Atk / 30 SpA / 30 Spe  
- Razor Leaf  
- Hidden Power [Fire]  
- Leech Seed  
- Sleep Powder  

Zapdos @ Leftovers  
Ability: Pressure  
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe  
Timid Nature  
IVs: 2 Atk / 30 Def  
- Thunderbolt  
- Hidden Power [Ice]  
- Toxic  
- Protect  

Tyranitar @ Choice Band  
Ability: Sand Stream  
EVs: 48 HP / 252 Atk / 208 Spe  
Adamant Nature  
- Rock Slide  
- Earthquake  
- Brick Break  
- Focus Punch  

Swampert @ Leftovers  
Ability: Torrent  
EVs: 28 Atk / 252 SpA / 228 Spe  
Rash Nature  
- Hydro Pump  
- Earthquake  
- Focus Punch  
- Ice Beam  

Jirachi @ Leftovers  
Ability: Serene Grace  
EVs: 252 HP / 108 SpA / 148 Spe  
Timid Nature  
IVs: 0 Atk  
- Thunderbolt  
- Ice Punch  
- Substitute  
- Calm Mind  

Dugtrio @ Choice Band  
Ability: Arena Trap  
EVs: 8 HP / 248 Atk / 252 Spe  
Jolly Nature  
- Earthquake  
- Hidden Power [Bug]  
- Aerial Ace  
- Rock Slide

【来源】zf

Tyranitar @ Leftovers  
Ability: Sand Stream  
EVs: 240 HP / 152 SpA / 116 Spe  
Modest Nature  
IVs: 0 Atk  
- Crunch  
- Pursuit  
- Taunt  
- Toxic  

Cacturne (M) @ Leftovers  
Ability: Sand Veil  
EVs: 252 HP / 28 SpD / 228 Spe  
Timid Nature  
- Substitute  
- Leech Seed  
- Hidden Power [Dark]  
- Spikes  

Steelix (M) @ Leftovers  
Ability: Rock Head  
EVs: 252 HP / 92 Atk / 16 Def / 144 SpD / 4 Spe  
Impish Nature  
- Earthquake  
- Hidden Power [Steel]  
- Explosion  
- Roar  

Magneton @ Magnet  
Ability: Magnet Pull  
EVs: 120 HP / 252 SpA / 136 Spe  
Modest Nature  
IVs: 2 Atk / 30 SpA / 30 Spe  
- Thunderbolt  
- Hidden Power [Fire]  
- Toxic  
- Protect  

Milotic (F) @ Leftovers  
Ability: Marvel Scale  
EVs: 252 HP / 248 Def / 8 Spe  
Bold Nature  
- Surf  
- Hypnosis  
- Recover  
- Toxic  

Aerodactyl @ Choice Band  
Ability: Rock Head  
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe  
Jolly Nature  
- Rock Slide  
- Earthquake  
- Hidden Power [Flying]  
- Double-Edge

【来源】Foggi

wyc2333

你怎么不让luigi聚聚指导你呢

TheTerrakion

@制裁之砾arceus 天梯排到，咱也不敢问

wyc2333

@TheTerrakion 那你可以看看国服old gens房间的roomintro，联系上面的G3选手寻求帮助

wyc2333

请问你是怎么弄到foggi队伍的呢？有链接吗
第一则战报
自从被电飞草电鸟打爆之后，我不认为venupert轴能达到预期anti电系的效果
T4 看到你露了妙蛙花+巨甲，感觉磁怪没什么用了，所以留场十万伏特，直接上地鼠或许可以
T8 在双捕获队伍中，雪拉比一般拉耐久多，可以直接出许愿星。考虑到许愿星压制或者拉了耐久能吃下地震，三地鼠不会直接对着上。如果没有三地鼠，许愿星蛮imba的。
T15 剧毒班会点岩崩之类的，如果没有撼动电鸟的技能，就会上水怪，这时候拉上我方水怪比较稳妥
第二则战报
T2 剧毒班没有OHKO电鸟的技能，电鸟可以留场，即便离场追击的伤害也不值一提，不如继续剧毒
T3 对面看你一直不冰光，而且巨甲被削弱，上地鼠没有问题。g3要多考虑对面的捕获战术，最常见的是蚁地狱三地鼠，磁力磁怪和追击班吉拉。马后炮的话，这里上大钢蛇
T7 我没玩过梦歌奈亚，真的要玩这只宝可梦可以看看cz的rep
但一对一打不过地鼠不应该，感觉草本还是要带的，至少你不会因为被地鼠抓死而哭泣。luigi也不是g3选手，地鼠点觉虫的话梦歌奈亚死的可能性就很大了
T11 这里就可以上钢蛇了

TheTerrakion

@制裁之砾arceus 我忘了orz，反正是smogon翻到的。

wyc2333

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至于怎么改，different people have different tastes.
如果不会改的话建议先多玩玩zf和linear的队伍